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09.06.08, 20:26 by Seppuku
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1st!! ... I think :)
Well, needless to say that i love your stories and hopefully i come to work on the german translation again (i'm a lazy one ^^)
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09.06.08, 20:26 by b123sedg
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| I love your fic's and I want to read more so please hurry up man, but no pressure on you and so till next time se ya!
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09.06.08, 20:26 by alucard3000
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| Wow, it's been a while since I found a fic that had this charm that keeps you hooked, I hope you continue this GREAT story, seriosuly, I expect it to become a classic among other great fics out there about Evangelion. The way you develop the story and the characters are excellent but please, update soon!!! ^^
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09.06.08, 20:26 by M44573r
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A very, very nice one.
My appreciation for your englsih skills, as well.
Proceed!
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09.06.08, 20:26 by b123sedg
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| I just want to ask something? are you really going to make people wait a mounth for chapter seven?, if so could you do me a faver and send me a pre-readers copy of chapter seven of T2t (in english) to my yahoo account which is b123sedg@yahoo.com. I know this is to much to ask but my birthdays comming up and it would be most appreseated if you would do this for me but if you can't then its ok.
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09.06.08, 20:26 by klasnic
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| I like your fic a lot.It´s the best fic about what happened after the Third Impact that I´ve never read.You are the best.
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09.06.08, 20:26 by ReMixed
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| Way cool and original!!!! I'm beyond addicted to T2t... I've never, in all my years of fan fic reading, have seen one thats so well written and original.. Keep up the great work:-D
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09.06.08, 20:26 by ReMixed
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| Way cool and original!!!! I'm beyond addicted to T2t... I've never, in all my years of fan fic reading, have seen one thats so well written and original.. Keep up the great work:-D
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09.06.08, 20:26 by ()
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| The wait is driving me insane!!!! T_T i need T2T before the 2nd impact happens next month... lol, no rush, just soooooo wanting to read the oh sooo cool book...:-D take cares and still looking forward to the next chapter T_T 74%
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09.06.08, 20:26 by Derek
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I just hope that it will be a happy ending
because this story is the best on the entire net
in my opinion.
I and it will be a real shame and a big dissappoiontment to be let down by a sad ending
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09.06.08, 20:26 by Derek
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and what I mean by a sad ending is if asuka and shinji end up dying or if only one of them dies and the other if left to grieve
or if they end up not being able to change much of anything big like prevent 3rd impact
im a WAFF kind of person so i like happy endings :)
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09.06.08, 20:26 by Joseph Gray
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| I LOVE IT !!!! I LOVE IT!!!! you broke my heart
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09.06.08, 20:26 by Clockworkchaos
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| Very well done, I loved the parallels and differences the second time around. The even chapters were also some of the most charming things I have ever read, keep up the good work!
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05.07.08, 04:01 by Derek Walter
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| God-LIKE!!!!! |
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17.07.08, 07:53 by JMB
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Very good fanfic. as for the page I suggest you to put son buttons or links to go to the next page at the end of each chapter.
Jmb
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21.08.08, 18:04 by Bard's Soul
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Awesomeness! I've been following 2nd Try for a while and it truely is great!
I'm sorry I didn't review as the story progressed, but if I were to try and do that now, I feel that it would just be a waste of space.
Anyway, wanted to review "Aki-chan's Life." Great idea, doing a doujin follow-up, brings in a nice combination of mediums: art, writing, coding, etc.
Really funny so far, so keep it up! One constructive crit, though: your action (ie body movement, running, etc.) seem a little forced artistically. I don't have any real suggestions for improvement other than to keep drawing and try quick sketches of people in motion in real life. It forces you to do less detail and focus more on body shape, etc.
Other than that, sweet! |
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30.03.09, 21:41 by Alexys
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Hi there.
I want to gratitude you for this great story.
This is one of my Fav-FF.
Actually I am done with the 5th chapter of the German edition.
I am looking forward to read the remaining chapters.
See ya. |
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18.05.09, 09:55 by Karrde
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| Probably my favorite Eva fanfiction. Stellar work, and definitely of a high enough quality to be published work. If you ever do write a novel... Well, I'd buy it. |
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18.06.09, 00:49 by Derek
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Maybe he can strike a deal with anno or something and the story made into a real manga? would be awsome! XD
of course that is prob not going to happen I mean eva is very nit picky, and since anno is busy with rebuild, which personally I still think sucks since they changed Asuka's last name and it might turn out to be more heartwrenching than the original and more confusing.
but still I would wish jimmy here all the luck in the world if he actually chose to try and get this turned into a real manga or something. |
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21.07.09, 21:32 by Agentomega
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| Absolutely brilliant fic... I nearly cried sometimes, and always found a grin firmly planted on my face (usually) coinciding with one of a character. It was emotionally pleasing, and the plot was most excellent. |
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13.01.10, 04:17 by Phoenix7
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This is...beautiful. It's heartwarming, it's fun to read, it's funny; simply incredible. There were even moments that got the tears going...
Quite frankly, I'm amazed how End Of Evangelion turned out so happily (whisperingly, I think I like this version better).
Anyhow, phenomenal work! And I will also cast my vote along with the rest: if you could somehow get this published, I'd buy it! |
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26.03.10, 14:34 by Seppuku
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Finally I finished t2t.
I have nothing else to say than: beautyfull and perfect!  Thank you!
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14.07.10, 20:10 by Leon
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Wonderfull one of the best storys i have ever ridden and it's a better ending for Evangelion  |
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24.07.10, 05:38 by iCards
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| This was a very well planned and executed story. Once I started it I was hooked, and all the themes of the story were played to near perfection. Personaly, I really enjoyed the post-apocolyptic building of family, and Rei's interaction with Aki as well as the revelations caused by it. |
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27.07.10, 11:55 by SamJaz
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It wasn't the best written story I've ever read, but I felt it during the many emotional bits. Some lines were oddly... rigid, as if they were being read by a script instead of being said by a character, but it didn't affect the emotional depth too adversely.
Good Job |
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