Aki-chan's Life
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A visit to the Grandparents - "This is where Mama came from?" - 199
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Look who's back! (If only he'd stay on model :/)
For those who missed it, I made an edit to the last page a few hours after the initial release.
I had originally drawn Aki there with only one (then bitten off) cookie in hand and the package in the other. But somehow, it started to nag on me that for the start of this page, that didn't feel right, because, yeah, the package could count as "more than one", but just having it in hand wouldn't necessarily imply she'd want to eat them all right away - and I wanted to have Asuka here in a warily chiding manner rather than her giving a premature warning.
So I checked my script, and indeed, she was supposed to have another in her mouth already. I was briefly considering "fixing" it in this one, by making Aki pull out another before finishing the previous, but I felt that would have hurt the flow.
So edit it was.
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